The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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(once again i love this) hmmm i know this feeling. For me its about being defiant, putting the finger up to life and saying 'give me all you've got, I can take it all'. But I'm not always strong. Emotive bleed of a write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


it is very honest. which is really nice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To b***h or not to b***h? I liked your poem a lot for it is real. Could not help noticing that even in Mosul, Iraq, one cannot still think about bitching! As you said, bitching can remind of something very familiar, very homey. It is reassuring for one knows how it works. However, one can also develop alternatives without denying this side of one's personality. You almost make it look like the most fantastic thing to do!
It's unapologetic too!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like this! i ve written a similar poem but didn't have the guts to publish it but maybe i will now.
I know how this feels and well conveyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


So much of where we can be is dark, I think we honestly have to acknowledge it as part of who and what we are---enjoy that part of you . . .

Posted 6 Years Ago


You pegged it. Pain and chaos feel like home. It all has to do with our comfort level and how we have grown up. I hope you learn peace is not an enemy and can be blessed and not boring. So dark. This was me 10 years ago. I hope you step out

Posted 6 Years Ago


I had to read this after seeing the title. lol
You are right about life , at times anyway.
Very good writing ..

Chloe

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to me, this is someone who loves pain and anguish because it is the only thing they've ever known. they've never felt happiness, so how can they understand that there is something more..
a really good write, it wasn't disgusting at all. great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. I like how you can feel that the person only knows disgust and "bad" for a lack of a better term, and therefore that is home. It's relatable - we feel most comfortable in emotions that may not necessarily be good for us but what we've grown up around.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mosul,iraq, Iraq



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