The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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"Dolor es amor y amor es dolor " Pain is love and love is pain. I've always viewed life that way . Most people think it happens the other way around. I understand when you say you deserve this and it's all you know but I want you to understand I don't think your disgusting . I think this was a brutal piece to write but my question to you is what did you think of it after you read it like a week later ? This piece didn't have a real flow to it but it didn't need to . I liked the raw , angry and erratic energy. Great work . BC

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would rather live a life of anguish than numbness. bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol i loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What you like is that you feel. That's all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You seem to doubt your way with words. You did great. You have a knack for writing something and making the words dance together in a very beautiful and mesmerizing way. You have quite the write, sir. Lend me some advice one day. I loved reading what you have written.

Deeply Yours,
Sarah.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To crave anger, hmm, that's differant, I think we all have a little b***h in us. Nice write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you were very nice to me when you reviewed my poetry... you ARE a good person... just because you don't FEEEEEEELLLLL that way doent mean you aren't... i really like this poem because it almost tell the story of my life... i dont live IN my depression... i live FOR it... it is me who i have become and who i have been for years... and who i will always be. and btw my favorite saying is... "lifes a b***h... you get over it and then you die..." :) good write even if you feel it wasnt

Posted 7 Years Ago


Couldn't help but read when it told me not too..........what anger! Life is a b***h that can drag you down and take you apart..........such an emotional piece of writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, couldn't resist! lol
This is an honest, inviting poem love!
True too! Very poignant and hard hitting!
Great work :)
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your funny Bluesman. Your not sad all the time. I have seen you when your happy. Keep you chin up. You know you have friends at least on here.

Kelley

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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