The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2018 bluessadmood


Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 15 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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To crave anger, hmm, that's differant, I think we all have a little b***h in us. Nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you were very nice to me when you reviewed my poetry... you ARE a good person... just because you don't FEEEEEEELLLLL that way doent mean you aren't... i really like this poem because it almost tell the story of my life... i dont live IN my depression... i live FOR it... it is me who i have become and who i have been for years... and who i will always be. and btw my favorite saying is... "lifes a b***h... you get over it and then you die..." :) good write even if you feel it wasnt

Posted 13 Years Ago


Couldn't help but read when it told me not too..........what anger! Life is a b***h that can drag you down and take you apart..........such an emotional piece of writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, couldn't resist! lol
This is an honest, inviting poem love!
True too! Very poignant and hard hitting!
Great work :)
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your funny Bluesman. Your not sad all the time. I have seen you when your happy. Keep you chin up. You know you have friends at least on here.

Kelley

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me'
The words of a masochist.
I love pain as well. I believe pain is something really deep and brings out the best emotions in you.
Someone who never feel pain and is always happy is someone shallow, and not deep.
If we love a rose, we got to love its thorns as well.
Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Never discredit your own work; it's like calling your own child disgusting or stupid. There's always room for improvement, but if you throw out an idea completely you can do nothing with it.

This piece is much more honest than I'll ever be. You come right out and admit your backwards preference for things when they are not going well. Truth is I think this is how we all feel to some extent. As much as we like the fun, happy times, there's something strangely alluring about misery. It's like we feel more special, more important almost when we're in pain.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So of course I read it. Not sure how it's disgusting, course I write about raping woman. But what can you do? Life is a b***h, unless you slit her throat, then she just kinda girgles. Good times,

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes. You can't publish and put don't read :). There's a bit of darkness in you. Don't be ashamed. There's some in all of us. Read through my pieces and you'll find a handful of really dark pieces. Just try to work them out like you' did here sometimes it helps v

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love your last line! For me, how a poem leaves me is probably the most important part. I also just love the way you wrote your lines out. beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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