The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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'I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me'
The words of a masochist.
I love pain as well. I believe pain is something really deep and brings out the best emotions in you.
Someone who never feel pain and is always happy is someone shallow, and not deep.
If we love a rose, we got to love its thorns as well.
Great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Never discredit your own work; it's like calling your own child disgusting or stupid. There's always room for improvement, but if you throw out an idea completely you can do nothing with it.

This piece is much more honest than I'll ever be. You come right out and admit your backwards preference for things when they are not going well. Truth is I think this is how we all feel to some extent. As much as we like the fun, happy times, there's something strangely alluring about misery. It's like we feel more special, more important almost when we're in pain.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So of course I read it. Not sure how it's disgusting, course I write about raping woman. But what can you do? Life is a b***h, unless you slit her throat, then she just kinda girgles. Good times,

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes. You can't publish and put don't read :). There's a bit of darkness in you. Don't be ashamed. There's some in all of us. Read through my pieces and you'll find a handful of really dark pieces. Just try to work them out like you' did here sometimes it helps v

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love your last line! For me, how a poem leaves me is probably the most important part. I also just love the way you wrote your lines out. beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

not bad at all... i'm interested in th emotion that is in context, within this piece... rather than the poem itself... its not my style! but the emotion is really strong... it makes a reader, a certain type of reader relate to the agony of solitude, that is different from exile... simply for it being a choice!
i like!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"I like it when I am getting old and rusty"
A very powerful and intriguing string of thoughts-- not disgusting at all!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

so....do you want us to read or not ???

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to this.. pain is sometimes easier to get used to more than happiness, because it's easy to get. i agree with Helena its human nature to want to take a look :) and it was worth it. Excellent poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

if this is disgusting
and i loved it
what does that say?
i love the chaos
knowing there's still an unknown
i love to be the b***h
embrace her
she gets things done
and is not afraid.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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