The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



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bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Life is soo rough where you are I can't imagine what you see as reality.I can only say I am moved by the pain of it

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Life is a marriage of opposites as John Bradshaw puts it, and, I for one, believe in it. Life has two strong opposing forces battling everyday within us, and each doesn't feel strange. Whichever of them wins the war, it greatly affects us. I have had my own highs and lows, but I embraced each moment, trying to love the very worst part of me even more. And though, there's great satisfaction in joy, sometimes sadness could be just as satisfying. Perhaps, it's just all about balance.

Such piece speaks for us all, methinks. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

the b***h she is-life.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I didn't find it disgusting, I can actually kind of relate to it. I think it was a good write. Keep it up. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was something that we all feel sometimes...life isn't a b***h...its much worse than that for many who suffer each moment.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

As the other reader said how can one not read as we are all secretly drawn to such

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is very very good, you display your anguish so freely in this. Very good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The title is what sucked me in. Then I forgot the title as I read it and got lost in the words. Frantic rambling feel to it. Then I'm trying to figure out what you're trying to describe. Then I get to the end: "The b***h she is...life." Real nice powerful punch. Perfect delivery.

Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I see there are 4 pages of reviews, By saying "don't read this" you have awakened curiosity in a lot of us. I find this write thought provoking but not disgusting.

It is a raw but a realistic look at much of life. Some of us seem to have more than our fair share of hard times, darkness, and chaos. And as your poem points out, we grow accustomed to it as it becomes our norm. Anything that would not cause pain would be so different and most humans fear change. But, Moayad, my friend, darkness can make a even faint candle glow brightly just as your light shines through your writes and reviews.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Please don't read? It was quite interesting. Life=B***h. The first part: "I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going
I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through" Reminds me of the movie Into the Wild. Good movie, it's a mind opener. I like this poem. Good work.


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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