The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[A.r. Bazian]

not bad at all... i'm interested in th emotion that is in context, within this piece... rather than the poem itself... its not my style! but the emotion is really strong... it makes a reader, a certain type of reader relate to the agony of solitude, that is different from exile... simply for it being a choice!
i like!

[India Brooks]

"I like it when I am getting old and rusty"
A very powerful and intriguing string of thoughts-- not disgusting at all!!

[Seashell]

so....do you want us to read or not ???

[the in between]

I can really relate to this.. pain is sometimes easier to get used to more than happiness, because it's easy to get. i agree with Helena its human nature to want to take a look :) and it was worth it. Excellent poem

[Liza]

if this is disgusting
and i loved it
what does that say?
i love the chaos
knowing there's still an unknown
i love to be the b***h
embrace her
she gets things done
and is not afraid.

[Tate Morgan]

Life is soo rough where you are I can't imagine what you see as reality.I can only say I am moved by the pain of it

[Gheeneil]

Life is a marriage of opposites as John Bradshaw puts it, and, I for one, believe in it. Life has two strong opposing forces battling everyday within us, and each doesn't feel strange. Whichever of them wins the war, it greatly affects us. I have had my own highs and lows, but I embraced each moment, trying to love the very worst part of me even more. And though, there's great satisfaction in joy, sometimes sadness could be just as satisfying. Perhaps, it's just all about balance.

Such piece speaks for us all, methinks. Keep writing.

[Alicante lullaby]

the b***h she is-life.

[JenLyn]

I didn't find it disgusting, I can actually kind of relate to it. I think it was a good write. Keep it up. :)

[Padma]

This was something that we all feel sometimes...life isn't a b***h...its much worse than that for many who suffer each moment.