The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



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bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Such a very expressive piece. I can feel the pain an sorrow. Very well written and yes life is hard sometimes. But there is always another day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poems are a great way to express a feeling or an idea
that another format would not bring the reader to the same conclusion
and your poem works from start to finish. Cherrie

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first I thought it is sexual, like BDSM...but then I have seen, it is irony. wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it. It raw and intriging.
totally honest in the nature of its intense emotions.
i can totally relate because i do feel like this sometimes pain
and darkness is comfortable
Life truely is a B***H!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I really liked the pureness of it all, and it was easy to relate to because everyone has had one of those not so great periods in their lifetime
Splendiforous! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! I love this one! It takes my back to how I felt on some of those REALLY hard times in life. Pain is something that unfortunatly we all must endure at some point in life, physical and emotional. It's honest and alittle gut wrenching which made it one of those poems that you dont want to miss a word! Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Jamie

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry, but I read it. I thought it was raw, and felt like someone was screaming it at me, Exposing themselves. It gave a very powerful image and message, and I heard it loud and clear. The fact that you wrote it in such a way that leaves it poetic still, is quite amazing.
Not an easy thing to do.
Good job!

- Kriss

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

honey, i like this ...shows your true emotion! and I couldn't help but peek at what you say not too..i agree with Helena...its human nature to take a look! x0xx00x

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol.....thanks for saying to not read.....i love this piece.....i feel this way many times :) thanks for venting for everyone who feels the same way, You dont want to keep it inside. it becomes poison

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is disgusting .. it's what Mankind has made it.

War after war, greed upon greed, people hurting people, not caring or respecting others. Man ruining what was a beautiful world - making it into the opposite of what the Creator gave us, may He forgive us.

Maybe we ought to see what is good.. because there IS good, a hand of friendship.. a smile.. communion with the stars, a sweet child's smile - they might not seem much but, they matter. It's easy to lose direction, to be led astray, to misunderstand and then lose yourself floundering.

I truly pray, and I do, Moayad, that you find just one thing a day that helps you realise that life is not completely a b***h.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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