The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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I had to.. you ask me not .. but in my mind your words.. means... Read me.. what a biotch.. ahahaha. love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol...Don't Read It! Are you kidding me? I would be a real life Bit*h if I didn't!
I love a daring invite and I'm oh so glad I stopped in ...I loved it! Every word, every phrase spoken from the heart and rich with reality. My favorite part is " Let it come, I like it when it's dark I fear the light, it does not becomes me" . Well blues, writing does and this one definitely becomes you... I greatly enjoyed it!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In the eternal words of Aesop Rock, "Life isn't a b***h. Life is a beautiful woman. You only call her a b***h when she won't let you get that..."

Check the song out for the rest, I don't want to be accused of vulgarity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

an equal expression I like is
at the end of the day its f***ing Dark



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooops, I read it! I am a curious one : )

I love the sarcasm throughout. At first I thought you were talking about a person but the closure really adds a good grand finale.

Good job!



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i have to agree with Helena, but life teachs us so much and wants us to learn from it, but its ones choice to take that lesson and learn from it then put it to knowladge......

thats what ive learned to learn the ways of learning from the wrongs and turning them to knowladge and it betters one self....

from samantha

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sniff sniff. It's sad because it's true. I'm sorry, my friend; no one should have to live with such a b***h. I hope she has a change of heart and rains happy on you!! It's my wish, anyway. Love you, Moayad. Keep your head up and your mouth open. Spread the knowledge and perhaps one day we'll all come to our senses and stop the insanity. Another wish on my part....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is cleverly done. It gives the aroma of self torture or punishing ones self for something that occurred in life. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It isn't disgusting. It's life and life can be a b***h. We all have our moments when things rub us wrong or weird things happen. I like your poem- it's honest.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I would agree with my friend Helena, a wonderful and honest write. Thaks also for the kind review of She Devil your comments and friendship are most welcome.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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