They Ask Me What Is Love

They Ask Me What Is Love

A Story by bluessadmood
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they tell me what is love..and i just can not answer..how can you tell about feelings..that are so strange so all i do is remember her face..her presence..and then i say what comes to my mind..for thats is the best way i could tell about my love to you

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they ask me what is love..how does it feel
i wonder at what they say..for its not a text to tell..how can you tell about feelings i myself hardly do understand
and all i do is ..i remeber you..your face..those looks  were made  for me
who sees no one but me..God how i loved those eyes..were made to see just me
when you come near..it feels so strange..like its not the same earth
the same life i used to know..and i feel so light in soul i could almost fly
i feel so much happiness i could never contain..how you do it ..i will never know
if i was in the deepest of blues ..with just a touch of your hand
with seeing that smile on your heavenly face..that smile will shine just for me
just you look at me ..into my eyes ,into my soul..i feel like in another world
and it feels like its just us..in some vast lonely lands
i see no other for you take over all my senses..i feel nothing but your presence
its like a bright light..some wonderful smell,some lovely sight.. i will never forget
i feel like i am newly birthed to this life
you own me ..how nice..i feel like a slave..you take control over me
  yet still i am so happy .. you own the whole of me
and i surrender my soul ..everything i own to you..you alone


© 2009 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
these were sudden strong emotions ..i felt i had to tell

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This poem describes the feel of being in new love.....all ecstasy...all blindness...all worshiping a mortal. No boundaries of day and night..or dream or reality.
"when you come near..it feels so strange..like its not the same earth
the same life i used to know..and i feel so light in soul i could almost fly" Very true.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great Poem! It was a Pleasure to read

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much,so glad you liked it.
This poem describes the feel of being in new love.....all ecstasy...all blindness...all worshiping a mortal. No boundaries of day and night..or dream or reality.
"when you come near..it feels so strange..like its not the same earth
the same life i used to know..and i feel so light in soul i could almost fly" Very true.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much passion! Yes, you have captured it my friend......exactly how love makes us feel. Like we are on another planet, in another time.......even in another body. They own us, they control us! So true.....
Thank you for telling us....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful
to wake to blue
to give completly no reservations
to become abdul to the beloved
to reach out and feel her hand on your face (you might say his a matter of perspective ;-) )
blue-sad-mood she s feeling
blue-sad-moon is calling
blue-salmoon is leaping breaking water
O blue salmon is breaking water
O blue salman is breaking water
O blue Salaam is calling
Wa Salaam blue Salome
Take Heart
Look left Look right
and cross the road

R
The Green crescent code ...



Posted 8 Years Ago


What a beautiful piece full of love and passion. Very romantic indeed. I love the way you express the emotions so clear here.



Posted 8 Years Ago


wow it's so strong, so heartfelt,
i can totally feel the deep sense of love
you felt for whoever you wrote this for.
Thank you for posting this piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very deep, emotional release. You have a way of drawing us right into those emotions. I really like the line:

"just you look at me ..into my eyes ,into my soul."

Even though you list this as a story, I read it more as a poem....a little fine tuning it would be an awesome poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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And they said it was hard to explain? Think you just managed it, you've expressed such a universal feeling so well! I've had a longing to put that feeling into words, I have tried and failed! My thoughts when reading this were - Ah, that's what it!

Really lovely read blue!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This captures love well from either sexes point of view. It makes me realize why I would do anything for this emotion while pondering which relationships contain true love. Your words make me long for love as well, while thinking about a relationship with the ultimate source of love being God.

Posted 8 Years Ago


:)
So deep is your love for that special someone...:)
she's is so lucky u love her...:)
i love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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