One Day In My Life

One Day In My Life

A Story by bluessadmood
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it will tell you everything ,no need to explain

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i usually awake at six am every morning ,i never sleep a lot really no more than few hours each day..
i drink some three cups of coffee open my lovely writercafe ,off course i use batteries as power,
since we dont have electricity but two or three hours every day..
at eight sharp i ran to work using my old car,i have to pass through some hundred check
points every day ,and all the while i pray to God if those bullets that are sprayed around me will somehow miss
me,as i already was car bombed three times,one of them was so close it nearly sent my head off,but they have missed me to this day,God must like me ,i am sure..
and while in my car driving i see corpses here and there,people urge me to carry to hospital..
but i refrain because if you take them then police there will surely arrest you to know how come
you have a body in your car,only if you are so lucky ,then you will spend some few months in
their lovely jails,and again if you are lucky you may come out in one piece..however i doubt it
very much..well then i am still driving my car ,and close to work ,my clinic,and then there is a shower of
shells ,small rockets fall like rains all around me ,its like fire works only at day light ha ha,its really funny..
and i keep driving ,i told you God must really love me..and i reach my work,drained out of any good wish in
this silly life,i spend all my time in clinic hearing stories of poor mothers losing their children being killed
day after day,their husbands,brothers..some whole buses full of people being bombed by mistake while driving on ..
so many will cry before my hands telling me its just too much to live through this ,i seen big men
cry in front of me,i swear..they tell me they cant feed their families since they cant work ,they cant reach work
so they may starve for days in the richest country..my friends ,this is part of the picture of life we lead here for the last six years
i hope you enjoyed this writing..


© 2010 bluessadmood



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bluessadmood
its like a an everyday nightmare

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So intense and sad... as so many cry here and some for such small trivial things in comparison as so much worse goes on in this world.. this is a real eye-opener and touches me so deeply.. I too pray for you my friend.. keep your hope and faith that one day.. this world may become a better place! Your writing makes me weep inside.. such bitter reality! Truly pain and such an atrocious setting.. keep writing.. it's good to share.. may an angel watch over your precious soul continously..

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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wow this is a very touching piece and a very identical story to what my dad has told me about Iraq if that is what your talking about...you have summed it up in a very nice piece.....may our prayers be with all humans living in this manner

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

ohh yes how lovely living here ,ha ha..how we suffered still;l we are so cynical about it,how strang.. read more
dunnia

4 Years Ago

hehe id love to read more of your work :)
So sad but so true how everything has come into play over these past few years. Makes me think of how the world will be affected when its all over, but then we think to ourselves is this nightmare of war and death really over or do they still creep up on us late at night when we are asleep. Very nice work.

-Writer *78*

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you,really
how well you capture that which is your personal daily horror able to write in lines that make me smile despite the gloom and sorrow...your three cups of coffee for example :) and how God must like you..I feel certain he does, perhaps he gave you this talent exactly for this purpose: to speak for those cannot. i feel the trapped feelings, the misery in those sharp little word-swords. I thank God for people like you who dare to write in such conditions.

Posted 4 Years Ago


bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much dear ,times i think i am just being a fool,with no avail,other times methink i am .. read more
A.A.Romanczuk

4 Years Ago

you're no fool, sir, not at all. i'm very grateful for these spilled words.
I can picture your situation so vividly through your words. Though, I know I could never truly grasp it without living it. I respect you so much for continuing as you do every day, even in the midst of all the misery. My heart goes out to you. This has made me realize how lucky I truly am. The trials and struggles in my life are nothing; microscopic in comparison to yours. God bless you. Keep writing. You are very inspiring, sir.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i do enjoy ur writing, love to see a day in the life of someone

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you captured "a day in your life" quiet realistically with this piece. i can't imagine what it must be like, though, through your words you drew me a picture. i will definitely remember to say a prayer for you, and peace for your country. yes, God does really love you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is craziness, it is a nightmare, no one deserves to live this way. I thought I had it bad...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is so sad. I can almost feel the pain, but I don't want to say I do. Because I don't know what you go through. So emotional.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I cant help but feel the pain this has caused It brings me to tears

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is such an overwhelming power to your words.. your life expressed so vividly through the darkness and the pain.. You have given us a glimpse.. one day.. and through it we can understand a bit more another place and time in the world.. Profoundly moving.. still pondering all you've shared, my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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