I will live

I will live

A Story by bluessadmood
"

just thoughts came to me,but really i am never a coward,just had to tell this

"

 

A friend asked me once, that he is surprised how I laugh and my writings and reviews are so happy and full of joy
While we lead such a terrible life. Here came these thoughts...
No matter if the sky is cloudy, rainy and black. I will live
No matter if my roads are bumpy full of never joyful rides. I will live
So many explosions, bombings around me, leading a very risky life. But I will live
I get very sad at what I see every day, so much misery around, but I will laugh and I will live
No matter how life is so hard and was ever so like this all my life. Still, I will live
And if I was caught between heavy fires, I always knew God was with me. And I lived
But if by mistake I was hit, then I would laugh and say goodbye to life. Then I could not live. Not any more
And I will excuse those who brought us these ways, as before I die, I will laugh again, it’s a stupid life anyway.....

 


© 2017 bluessadmood



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Hi bluessadmood: It is apropos that I found you today because of the agreement between the US and Iraq; hopefully that's a good thing and will lead to a more secure and peaceful world. Though of course there are no easy answers and it is not known yet whether the US ultimately will sign the agreement since our Congress will have to approve. Thus, with that backdrop, it is all the more poignant to read this "story" of yours. It speaks to me of the triumph of the human spirit, of yours. Would that we all have that depth within us to draw out the light even in the midst of terrible darkness. I don't know whether you want any suggestions are not. I won't make any at this time, in case you don't, so as not to detract from the beauty you have shared. If you do want suggestions, let me know and I will share them with you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

ohh my friend ,you will never know how we suffer ,thats how the beauty to these words..of all the wr.. read more



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Wow...I related to the very core of it!
I love how beautifully you have put light in the darkness of the age!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Ohh how you beautifully respondedicated here to my words..to put light in the darkness of this age.... read more
Nene

5 Months Ago

I totally agree with you!.
It was amazing!
Love your thoughts!
Yes, indeed. We survive...to live. Loved this and it mirrors my own beliefs. Stay in the land of the living...we have writers.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Ohh so glad you liked this..you know even this as lots of my writings it was a review to some other .. read more
I love the message in this. So raw and real, keep it up.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, you are still here, still laughing I hope! I like 'it's a stupid life anyway...'

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

7 Months Ago

Oh hey my friend,has had, when I wrote that I would live it could not apply more to what happened th.. read more
bluessadmood

7 Months Ago

All homes were demolished ,it fell on our heads..till the army struck in and we ran with our lives.... read more
Hi bluessadmood: It is apropos that I found you today because of the agreement between the US and Iraq; hopefully that's a good thing and will lead to a more secure and peaceful world. Though of course there are no easy answers and it is not known yet whether the US ultimately will sign the agreement since our Congress will have to approve. Thus, with that backdrop, it is all the more poignant to read this "story" of yours. It speaks to me of the triumph of the human spirit, of yours. Would that we all have that depth within us to draw out the light even in the midst of terrible darkness. I don't know whether you want any suggestions are not. I won't make any at this time, in case you don't, so as not to detract from the beauty you have shared. If you do want suggestions, let me know and I will share them with you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

ohh my friend ,you will never know how we suffer ,thats how the beauty to these words..of all the wr.. read more
I can not know what you have endured, but your writing is beautiful. I hope that you continue.

Posted 2 Years Ago


bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

exactly dear friends ,no mater ,what this life is so hard on us like never ending torture take it as.. read more
This is so true. Love it!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. =] No matter what happens in life, we can always say we were there and we lived through it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

thank you so much ,glad you liked it
This reminded me to get to work on a piece that has been stuck in the back of my mind for quite some time now....I must thank you for that (unwitting as it was, the impact was the same as if you'd written your piece directly to me). What can we do but live? Some of us grapple with manufactured challenges from comfy thrones and too easily forget (did we ever really know) the very real horrors that face so many we'll never know. Thank you for the reminder.

CM.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you so much,i see you were impressed by it,i am glad
All I can say, is that your poem hit it right on the head. I have been around the world and in places, that aren't in "The first world". (for the lack of a better term) they seem to be, happier with, what they have. They always have a smile on there faces, but if an American or European where in there shoes, they would be like little babies crying for their mommy.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you,yes its like hell living in such places.
solitudespeaker2

4 Years Ago

it is the first thing iv'e read on this website and it is true and beautiful.
bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you really,glad you liked it

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