I will live

just thoughts came to me,but really i am never a coward,just had to tell this

 

A friend asked me once, that he is surprised how I laugh and my writings and reviews are so happy and full of joy

While we lead such a terrible life. Here came these thoughts...

No matter if the sky is cloudy, rainy and black. I will live

No matter if my roads are bumpy full of never joyful rides. I will live

So many explosions, bombings around me, leading a very risky life. But I will live

I get very sad at what I see every day, so much misery around, but I will laugh and I will live

No matter how life is so hard and was ever so like this all my life. Still, I will live

And if I was caught between heavy fires, I always knew God was with me. And I lived

But if by mistake I was hit, then I would laugh and say goodbye to life. Then I could not live. Not any more

And I will excuse those who brought us these ways, as before I die, I will laugh again, it’s a stupid life anyway.....

 

Author's Note

whatever

Reviews

[Taylor]

Hi bluessadmood: It is apropos that I found you today because of the agreement between the US and Iraq; hopefully that's a good thing and will lead to a more secure and peaceful world. Though of course there are no easy answers and it is not known yet whether the US ultimately will sign the agreement since our Congress will have to approve. Thus, with that backdrop, it is all the more poignant to read this "story" of yours. It speaks to me of the triumph of the human spirit, of yours. Would that we all have that depth within us to draw out the light even in the midst of terrible darkness. I don't know whether you want any suggestions are not. I won't make any at this time, in case you don't, so as not to detract from the beauty you have shared. If you do want suggestions, let me know and I will share them with you.

[bluessadmood]

ohh my friend ,you will never know how we suffer ,thats how the beauty to these words..of all the writers i read..i used to read about his life..only those who have really ,really suffered ,they came with the most beatiful writings

[MR_BERG]

I look at this piece more as poetry than story, and it's compelling. Very upbeat for a desperate situation.

[Escape My Fate]

Ammazing :D

[Jennifer Lenhardt]

in every situation this is the attitude we should all aspire to. Tate Morgan said it best! thank you for sharing your thoughts - you should write a book:) maybe a memoir?

[bluessadmood]

You are a very dear friend..you have not been put through this
if you have you would have done even be as good as i am
thank you so much for the compliment..its really great.

[Tate Morgan]

God you are a prophet a saint among men.Yours is the soul of a hero the shell of a man held by the invincibility of divinity.I bow to your humble humanity!
You are my inspiration You are the man I wish i could be like ,
Your Friend Tate

[futurepast.]

That's the spirit ~ The positive attitude.
Live, to fight.
It asks for a lot of courage to keep yourself strong among all those hardships in your life, and that's what you do... keep your faith strong.
I love it..

[Nassira Merahi]

you have such a positives mind in such a negative situation, that it gives a unique example of how we should think and be whenever we feel that the whole world is crumbling over us..... I have just discovered your writing and I going to read and review some more..... beautiful :)
Salaam

[eversosweetly]

I am moved by your determination to live and laugh despite extreme hardship. You are an inspiration and encouragement to so many people around the world here on Writers Cafe!

[Zeek4]

Truly inspirational. Your short story brought tears to my eyes. To live under such conditions is unimaginable to me. I only hope I could develop the attitude that keeps you strong.