Never Believed In Supermen

Never Believed In Supermen

A Story by bluessadmood
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just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

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The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..
 
Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..
 
Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..
                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 


© 2009 bluessadmood



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whatever

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Lovely! Superheroes, don't we all have one? Like our heroes, who we admire, who we trust, to us, they're all our very own superhero :) I love how you describe the superhero, to bring a smile to everyone. That will be the best power in this world! to make someone laugh when they're down!
Nice Written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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it was very well written. flowed well, vivid imagination and great word usage. Nice job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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"whatever?" Uhh, no.
I loved this :D
Good flow, very detailed,
nice job:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful , such a heart filled write. Touching and sincere!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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oh, these are wonderful words

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Whatever? Oh no...far from it, dear Blues...why this is...oh..it is..bewitching..enchanting..charming..endearing...darling..beautiful...oh it is words that have not yet been invented....I see your soul..the depths of your heart..this is sweetness unmeasurable...what a sincere, lovely dedication to someone...how wonderful to have such a someone...astonishing...stunning..this is...truly beautiful..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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'no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes'
such a perfect line...
a great view of love and how it can make everything clearer and easier and hope filled.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful piece, and very sincere. Also somewhat magical :) You overflowed this piece with emotion, and that was what made it great. Wonderful job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is beautiful! You tenderly express so much love and emotion in this lovely sentimental piece. I really enjoyed reading this, my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol... this is forever..100 % magical

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is extremely beautiful. I agree with Helen, you do have a tender voice here. You captured the power of love in this piece. Lovely and wonderfully expressed...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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