Never Believed In Supermen

Never Believed In Supermen

A Story by bluessadmood
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just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

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The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..
 
Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..
 
Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..
                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 


© 2009 bluessadmood



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Lovely! Superheroes, don't we all have one? Like our heroes, who we admire, who we trust, to us, they're all our very own superhero :) I love how you describe the superhero, to bring a smile to everyone. That will be the best power in this world! to make someone laugh when they're down!
Nice Written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words. The extract I have chosen below is perhaps too long but It is difficult to choose a favourite part as it is all so touching.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words. The extract I have chosen below is perhaps too long but It is difficult to choose a favourite part as it is all so touching.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully romantic! Such sweet sentiment. They way you express your love and admiration for the beloved is superb! I loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firstly, I loved the title of this piece, it is so engaging. It is so brilliant to have that one person who changes the direction of your life, who, as you say, 'makes the rules'. You capture the near divinity of your friend that, 'all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the sweetest heavens..' what emotion from a beautiful heart.



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, who needs supermen when there are so much more amazing things in this world; that we can find within very real people. *smile* I loved this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh such sweet dreamy thoughts.....
It had such a gentleness and serenity to it.....a mistiness
about it and hope shining through the darkness.

I loved it! Very well done indeed Moayad.

Kind regards
Helena



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you speak about remembering a beauteous bella in the blooming garden of drems, wonderful. Surely the breeze of new life in freedm will bless your heart soon. just be patient. we are here to fall in love and if we will hold it tight.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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