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Death just pssed me by


A Story by bluessadmood
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Death came so near and never said hello..I was so happy,I even laughed ..could be crazy to say ths,still..
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A bomb tickled my ears..
Today I was walking though the streets picking and buying things that I reconstruct at home to help in any way to make things like a small hand made air cooler working on batteries ..
for we are always without power supply so we have to be creative about it.The heat at these times of the year is so exhausting ..
So we try to accomodate in every possible way..I was buying some electrical things,to help me deal with the stifling heat..
I was so absorbed in thoughts of what to get when I heard a deafening voice its like a meter away from me..
there was lots of commotion around me ..but I so quietly look around to see two people that the bomb have sent to the ground
You may see it funny but I smiled ,I swear I was even happy,its like a circus around me,you never get bored around here..
for some stupendous things happen around the clock and all so sudden..you see people lie to the ground ,some may then
rise up again ,or some maybe helped to their feet,but some unlucky will never rise up again..
I dont know but being so close to death all the while give you such a feelngs you could never understand..
And its a happy feelings in a way,I know the whole picture is so tragic,still in a way its so different from
anything I ever lived or known before ..I ve never walked alongside and so near to death..it gives you a special joy
to know that he (death) was only a few meters away and a few minutes he was here around,he never said hello
he just passed me by,played around a little made a little work,taking a few lives and took leave..
and I was left there alone ..never know what to feel or say..but all along I felt a special joy..I could be crazy
But I was happy ,I know I was happy at the time..then with the so much heat and sun above me
I excused myself from him(death)and said goodbye ,till we meet again,and slowly I left.


© 2009 bluessadmood



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What an awesome, thought provoking, story! Thank God you are here to tell it! Between the smothering heat and the 'circus' around you, I am amazed you still have any sanity left. Humor and the joy of knowing that death passed by so close but did not touch you personally would, I think, give you a sense of euphoria. Thanks for sharing this with us, my friend.

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