You Deserve To Live

You Deserve To Live

A Story by bluessadmood
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to all brave Syrians,i ve never see or read in my whole life,such beautiful sacrifices like the ones you do..

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ohh dear ones you are never going down..how i see you
going high up to heaven,you are so precious,never feel low
by God you told the whole world how to live while you are dying
beautiful souls ,all ages ,he never discriminate..he kills you all
old and small.yes so much justice in what he does,all the killings
all the butchering of whole families..he says a surgeon will smear all body
with your blood to amputate,the tumor so he says..a surgeon will never kill you stupid
he will rather die to see blood spilled the way you do..never give up dear ones
i know ,just the whole world is against you ,yes,east and west..still hang on
you will reach the stars one day ,i swear ,the whole world and history
one day will talk of you..how you killed a giant ,with bare hands
how i marvel what you do,i shed tears though for you still happy

© 2012 bluessadmood



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You wrote on a hard topic. I have been to Syria. Kind and good people. I wish the violence would stop. Time for Syria to close down the borders and allow their people to fix their problems. A lot of great history and wise people need to be left alone by hateful and goal minded folks. I pray for peace and calm in the country of Syria. Thank you for the poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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peace- is a foreigen word in such a unsteady world, but in times like those a surgeon is the true diplomat who can only offer his skill and yes at times a tear


Posted 4 Years Ago


these are very moving words makes me want to read up on the Syrians to fully wrap myself in the emotion of your words. Great write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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bluessadmood

4 Years Ago

thank you dear,sorry for being lots away,its life..it just sucks you in at times..
always watc.. read more
yet another nice work of art....so relieving to know people actually care

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i submit this to my fav reading. inspiring....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely words of encouragement!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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A.A.Romanczuk

5 Years Ago

The trouble is that not everyone takes the time to contemplate issues outside of their own little wo.. read more
bluessadmood

5 Years Ago

ut dear this is the 21st century,its a disgrace to all decent beliefs,and its the russians and chine.. read more
A.A.Romanczuk

5 Years Ago

i quite agree. it is a disgrace. and its a shame that the russians and chinese encourage it for self.. read more
You wrote on a hard topic. I have been to Syria. Kind and good people. I wish the violence would stop. Time for Syria to close down the borders and allow their people to fix their problems. A lot of great history and wise people need to be left alone by hateful and goal minded folks. I pray for peace and calm in the country of Syria. Thank you for the poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepness in this write, so emotional too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes words have two meanings.......thank you for this

Posted 5 Years Ago


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