Phantom Pain

Phantom Pain

A Poem by k
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"If you can't see it, it's not real abuse."

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Behold your masterpiece
on my skin, invisible ink
runs down my arms.
There's no black or blue, it's not real.
Words have no power to make you feel.
Of course, I have no excuse.
If you can't see it, it's not real abuse.
We're all just after attention, after all,
and every one of us is crazy.
That's what you'll tell them.
I never even touched them, you'll say.
I guess this is just phantom pain.

© 2017 k



Author's Note

k
This poor poem has been rewritten and deconstructed beyond recognition several times. Let me know if it needs it again! Thanks for reading!

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The pain of words or neglect are often more hurtful than a physical attack. I appreciate your writing.

Take care - Dave

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first three lines are indeed masterful as you draw the reader in with an angry, sarcastic comment. In this the hidden abuse is exposed and the fact it remains hidden and is difficult to challenge remains.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 15, 2017
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