Just To Belong

This Archostic poetry. Tell me what you think?

Journey through this life

Understanding what you see

Stay on your path to believe

Take a chance to maybe exceed  

 

Try not to lose your way

Our life in one, we won’t break

 

Be careful

Evil can be tricky

Losing your mind you can be fooled

Outside of your tracks is where you don’t want to be

Nothing gained is nothing achieved

Go the distance; what do you have to lose?

Reviews

[Pax]

Brilliant archostic!
I've not tried it yet, someday i will.
.....it fit so well
...i like the positivism of the poem
..great job

[Brandon Mathis]

Thank you i'm going to try some more of these

[kublakhan27]

I've never tried one of these before but I really like this one...it's positive and has a bit of intrigue too.

[Brandon Mathis]

try it!!!!!!!!!

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah I tend to be lazy when it comes to fixed forms but I certainly will try one sometime.

[Lost in Wonderland]

awesome acrostic brandon!
God Bless

[Brandon Mathis]

yeah i couldn't remember what it was called lol

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha