Gone

Loss

Gone.

Now she's gone.

She's on me,she's off me.

Beck and call.

Soft to the touch,loud like a horn.

Eyes that glaze and show no emotion,that almost smile when I cry.

You bring me down.

You end me.

Go.

Gone.

Reviews

[zainul]

Explored the beauty of this small thing once and again.
It seems to have infinite meanings that I can't explain.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Love lost again and again..and again.

[zainul]

Yes,Bob that gives constant pain.

[Bob Sherunkle]

A pain that I'm used to.

[zainul]

I understand that and hope you will have a pleasant time.

[Bob Sherunkle]

I'l do my best !

[Jared Michael Smith]

Short but powerful. Very nicely done! :-)

[Bob Sherunkle]

Many thanks,very kind of you.I'm on holiday this week so I will read your work.Dont want anyone to think I'm ignoring theirs! Thanks again.

[Jared Michael Smith]

Of course. :)

[Mark]

Bob,nice work on Gone.Liked the short story,very frenetic!

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Sometimes ya gotta be down rite blunt and say what ya mean,Its like that its better that it is gone! Awesome write Bob.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Many thanks Jonathan.

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Welcome Bob:)

[emmajoy]

Cut off in its prime, this poem. The sense of a cut, the sharp stab of emotion. Hurts to read it.

'Eyes that glaze and show no emotion,that almost smile when I cry.' Too many know that feeling!

[Bob Sherunkle]

Sorry Emma,put my response in some one elses comments.Much appreciated.I think that's that just the human experience,no getting away from it i'm afraid!

[emmajoy]

Hope today's light helps. Happy Friday.

[Bob Sherunkle]

I hope so !Enjoy your weekend.

[Tom Rouse]

Wow...such emotion in short form...you've captured the heartbreak of loss...I think I knew her! lol! Great job!

[Bob Sherunkle]

Many thanks Tom,we all know her!

[Bob Sherunkle]

Thanks for giving it a moment of your time Emma.