Tornado

Tornado

A Poem by boobalajcushion
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Falling in love with the wrong people is hard, but life is only showing you the light.

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Tornado

Your words smelt like freshly cut grass, 
Your touch felt like stardust falling on my scars. 
I am a tornado in the dark,
You are a diamond with a beating heart. 
I wanted to show you the light - 
How lovely it could be..
The sky was in your eyes, 
But that view was not for me.
You were only a fleeting sight,
A thousand books in one line. 



© 2017 boobalajcushion



Author's Note

boobalajcushion
Once again, I'm not 100% on grammar and punctuation, but I guess I focus more on feeling when I write. :)

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well even if this one wasn`t the one,you should have fun looking

Posted 2 Months Ago


boobalajcushion

2 Months Ago

Indeed! I think things happen for a reason and there is always good in a bad situation :)
"Your words smell like freshly cut grass" I found it's a good smell, but there are others who hate it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


To be honest, I'm struggling with a few metaphors, but I got others. If you want to give me a click and let me know how you feel about my work please let me know :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


boobalajcushion

2 Months Ago

Ah, I understand now. I have mentioned on a few of my poems that I write about my feelings, so to me.. read more
boobalajcushion

2 Months Ago

It's like a virgin listening to rap and saying, "What, I don't f*ck b*tches?" The shoe wont fit ever.. read more
Celt of the Redland Realm

2 Months Ago

So positive, of course you are right, shoes don't fit everyone, but I like your work :)
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But when you find your true love life is the most beautiful thing, mire than you ever dared dream of. Mind you, you poor women have to snog a few frogs on the way to finding your Prince, can be fun though I suppose.
Again enjoyed the read

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 30, 2017
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boobalajcushion
boobalajcushion

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia



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I'm a creative individual who typically starts something and wanders to the next project, leaving an unfinished trail of chaos behind myself. Hobbies in this area include literature, poetry, singing, .. more..

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