Alice is Dead

Alice is Dead

A Poem by Charlie

Alice, I don't know what to do
The hollow here, it welcomes you

You've fallen through a hole
You lose your sanity as they touch your soul

I want you to know that the smoke bellows out in the night
Falling, running, away from the light

You believe anything when they tear at your eyes
All the truths, all the lies

Magic potions, grinning fur
Hurry back, it's all a blur

Magic poisons, royal tea
Run screaming, screaming fast to me

© 2011 Charlie


Author's Note

Charlie
what do you think? i just got out of my cutter phase so i really want to see how i did

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It's perfect! A whole new twist to a great story!

Posted 12 Years Ago


its not very good but i like that it's kinda creepy


Posted 12 Years Ago


that... was.... lovely
i really dont know what to tell you.... but i enjoyed it
and it also inspired me
huzzah :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2011
Last Updated on June 23, 2011
Tags: alice is dead, hole, rabbit, tea, run

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Charlie
Charlie

Studio City, CA



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