Just a simple leaf

This is a poem I wrote for L.A. and I was just hoping I could get some feed back. I had to write a poem about an item that makes me think of fall. I had to write in first person. Please review me.

             Just A Simple Leaf

 

I am just a simple leaf.

Whipping and whirling though the crisp November air

I will become a piece of Earth’s homemade carpet

I will break out of my shell

 Show my true colors

I will be myself

 

I am just a simple leaf

I am like a bird soaring though the air

I no longer blend with everyone else

We all look different in our own way

 

I am just a simple leaf

The snow of fall

I am a leaf a cloud floating in the air

I will gently fall to the ground

The wind will push me away

Now I may soar

 

 

I am just a simple leaf

I now am going my own way

In the November air

I like it best like this

I am different

I am unique

 

I am not just a simple leaf

I no longer blend

I no longer am the same green

I can be what I want to be

 

I am not just a simple leaf

I will change

I will be myself

 

I am not a simple leaf

I am not like any other leaf

I am a different leaf

I am a unique leaf

 

Author's Note

i just copy-pasted from my paper i typed