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A Poem by frozensakura

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11


© 2012 frozensakura



Author's Note

frozensakura
I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Chole<3

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I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

frozensakura

9 Months Ago

i know what you mean :(


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This is so sad..... it makes me think of a friend that I hardly get to see. Very well written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

frozensakura

6 Months Ago

thank you for your review!!
I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

frozensakura

9 Months Ago

i know what you mean :(
awwwwww don't make me cry this poem is so sad but it's very well written great job

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is full of love. thank you for sharing it with all of us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

that part had really got me.... :|

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww it must be sad to lose a beloved...i 've lost lot but they were people i weren't close too or just there, sad poem :/

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tears trickling

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is always a reason for someones writing so it can never be a fail. Great write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's really good , i can relate ,and when someone can relate it's a good peice

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This doesn't fail at all, I really enjoyed it. "and together till the end was held forever true" I loved that line, it was so beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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