butterflies...

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

Reviews

[Calypso]

This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

[Scarlett Letter]

I Love it so Much

[luke312]

I like your boredom its nice to read.

[StormCloud]

lol who doesn't get bored at three in the morning? Well written, I wouldn't have been able to write something at three and still be able to understand it later.

[ni ni]

You are an amazing writer! I think you are going to go very far in life!!!!

[LadyNaida]

Chole, this is beautiful. I love it!

My favorite part:
"there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well ".

[Linda]

Soooo goood xxxx

[MoonAngel]

I was taken to an old world of fantasy with this. I could hear the chimes and felt like a child reading this. I don't think you should rhyme, though. The piece doesn't need it, and it threatens to make the piece more immature than it is. A simple, but effective write.

[Melissa Edmunds]

This is really good. Very enjoyable. Nice break. Well done.

[storiestotell]

I loved it. Sounded like a chant or a fairy tale saying.

[J.M]

It's actually kinda cute without being cheesy - I like it.