The Power of Love

 A closed flower in the dark of night

                  Coldness

                            Darkness

                                       The feeling of fright.

Until the day the sun breaks through 

A surrounding hate will swallow you.

Then they'll come

And day will break

And love will overpower hate

A flower blooms in the bright of day 

And as it blooms the leaves sway 

The petals open the stem rises above

All because of the power of love.

Reviews

[Emmy]

Ohhh. ;O

Amazin.

[Dianne]

I really like this poem. It is very well written and meaningful. Great job.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

The power of love is a curious thing, makes one man cry another sing, turn your heart into a little white dove, that's the power, the power of love (paraphrased from memory). I like your poem.

[Angel's Lady]

The petals open the stem rises above
All because of the power of love.

Growth! Ah...
Terrific job!

[X Sandra X]

Wow, this one is good. I also love the way it is set up. It flows perfectly, nice very nice.

[Maria C. Donado]

I totally loved this! I don't know why you said that your poem sucked! I think it's really good, you used the rhyming thingy (=.= yes I know I have a very childish vocabulary lol) just right! Last time I tried to rhyme I made a fool out of myself ;.;

[Mintwhiskers]

I always loved this poem u go girl

[Tuff Stuff]

Darkness is my thing, Homes!