Come On, Lover

Come On, Lover

A Poem by Brenda Woods
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A song for the type of romances that end tragically.

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Come on lover, didn't mean to lie,
Come on lover, don't you cry.
We used to be best friends,
Now I'm falling apart,
Come on lover, can we restart?

I know we said some things, we hurt each other, oh my darling.
I know I kissed you, then I lied, said that it meant nothing.
I want you back, want you back,
Oh please come back, please come back.
I know life gets hard, oh baby, that's the way things are.
I'm sorry it's hard for me to admit you're in my heart.
I'll be yours, I'll be yours,
Oh, I'll be yours, I'll be yours.


Come on lover, we could take the world on, me and you, tonight.
Come on lover, don't you know that we're gonna be just fine?
You and me, oh I know we'll be forever,
Come on lover, take my hand.


I know we've had our ups and downs, but I will always love you.
And I promise, give me one last chance, I will be true.
Oh please be kind, be kind to me tonight,
Be mine, oh, be mine.


Come on lover, we could take the world on, me and you, tonight.
Come on lover, don't you know that we're gonna be just fine?
You and me, oh I know we'll be forever,
Come on lover, ooh--
Come on lover, the stars, they all sing out for us.
Come on lover, you're the only one I'll ever love.
You and me, oh I knew we'd be forever,
Come on lover, don't let go.


Never thought things could be this way,
Oh my darling, be brave.
We're gonna be okay.
No, please don't go away...


Come on lover, you know I'd take the blame for you, if I could.
Come on lover, why did our story have to end the way it did?
I--- forgive you,
I--- will miss you,
And I--- thought we'd be forever,
Guess I was wrong.


Come on lover, just one more time,
Come on lover, don't say goodbye.
Come on lover... take my hand.
Come on lover...
Goodbye lover...
Goodbye lover... goodbye.



(https://soundcloud.com/bravestofheart/come-on-lover)

© 2015 Brenda Woods


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This seems like it would be an extremely catchy song if somebody sang it. However, unlike a lot of catchy songs nowadays, this one is actually quite well written and full of legitimate emotion. I really enjoyed reading this, and wouldn't be surprised if I heard this on the radio one day. Great work!

In the end, this has earned a solid 95/100 in my eyes. Nicely done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

8 Years Ago

Ah, thank you so much! I have recorded it (albeit on the standard built in microphone on my laptop, .. read more
DoormanDan

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! I didn't notice the link before, so I'll check it out. I tried befriending it, bu.. read more
Brenda Woods

8 Years Ago

Oh no! What did it do to your backpack?? (At least you can say you tried, though. And at least you d.. read more



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Those words allow great tune to take them and make them come out in the colors of the emotion, there's elasticity. A very fine piece of work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
This seems like it would be an extremely catchy song if somebody sang it. However, unlike a lot of catchy songs nowadays, this one is actually quite well written and full of legitimate emotion. I really enjoyed reading this, and wouldn't be surprised if I heard this on the radio one day. Great work!

In the end, this has earned a solid 95/100 in my eyes. Nicely done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

8 Years Ago

Ah, thank you so much! I have recorded it (albeit on the standard built in microphone on my laptop, .. read more
DoormanDan

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! I didn't notice the link before, so I'll check it out. I tried befriending it, bu.. read more
Brenda Woods

8 Years Ago

Oh no! What did it do to your backpack?? (At least you can say you tried, though. And at least you d.. read more
Amazing!!!!!! And the song OMG!!!!!!!!! I swear I have a new favourite song!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that means a lot
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

You are welcome

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Added on November 24, 2014
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Brenda Woods
Brenda Woods

Auckland, New Zealand



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19 year old costume student. I love costumes, cosplay, music and writing. Flute player since 2005, I also play piccolo, guitar and ukulele. Most of my writing tends to be poetry or lyrics/songwriting,.. more..

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