Dancing with a Flame

it�s a poem about a woman who is sexy and seductive. it�s about a woman who is desired by many men, men who think they can tame her and call her their own. It's a poem about a women who doesn�t want someone to tame her but to run wild and free beside her.

She's dancing wild and crazy her body in a flame
She's beckoning you over to see if you can hang
She wraps her arms around your neck
She's whispering your name
Teasing and moaning
She's dispersing more flames
She wants you she needs you
that's what she claims

You move and you dance,
she's swaying her hips
The songs almost over
you tighten your grip
The rooms getting hotter,
Lust dripping down your lips

Twisting and turning
the flames are getting higher
your times almost up
heat rushing through your veins
Your body getting hotter
You just knew she could be tamed
And for that you incinerate
A pile of ashes with no name

She's dancing wild and crazy her body in a flame
She's beckoning you over to see if you can hang
She wraps her arms around your neck
She's whispering your name
Now your doing the fire dance
The dance of the untamed.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh that was nice ,i always liked these women,always on their own,you can reach but not touch
You can never tame,she is so free,she can come near allure you,but thats all you get..she is so free..
Dancing wild and crazy body like a flame,calling for you to see if you can hang..
Wraps her arms around you,whispering your name,teasing and moaning..
desiring more flames,she wants you and needs you ,so she claims
You move and dance and she sways,song is over,lust on your lips
Flames getting higher,heat rushing your veins..then you know
and you dance ..the dance of the untamed
really enjoyed this,special character of women..you can reach but never touch
lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Woman can have the power to steal a man heart and soul with a dance or a whisper. I like the feel and emotion of this poem. Ending was perfect. Nothing as beautiful as freedom in soul and in life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[John McGrael]

wow, i really like the last two lines!!! theyre super super super cool!!!!! overall a very well-written poem!!

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! I loved it! It was beautifully written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! Great use and variety of words! The way you used those words... and the descriptions... was amazing! Fantastic poem! :D

[~amanda~]

can i just say, even your summaries are poetry! thats so cool! this poem is hot!!! i loved the ending. it says everything without giving too much to the reader, which leaves the imagination to do a lot of the work. very powerful choice...

[-K]

this one describes my kinda girl exactly.....I love the poem. I think your a great writer. keep up the good work. check out my stuff if u get the time. thanxx.

[Chaos Stone]

very enjoyable work
great premise and fantastic metaphor
you write very well and you should keep writing
and post them here for all to read :)

[S.S.P.]

good job. clear and concise. hope to see more soon :)

[NightsShade]

Wow, I think that the title is what initialy caught my attention. I think that the poem almost reminded me of a gypsy dancing in front of a fire, they can't be tamed either. Your poem was very.... mystical and captizating. It tells a story, one that could go on forever. A fire was the perfect way to describe this women.

Truly a great write! Keep up the wonderful work!!

Peace,
NightsShade