Silence

not speaking: a refusal, failure, or inability to speak. why does silence have to mean something negative!?!?! if i can sit with someone in silence it means i am happy just being with you we dont need words.

Silence for you means
awkward sentences
falsified friendships
and heartless words

silence for me means
I'm content
plain happy
just sitting here with you
words would only ruin
this moment here for two

Reviews

[-K]

The shortest, sweetest, and most simplistic piece of poetry! I've never heard any true-er (idk how to spell that lol!) words before. Trully good work, keep it up Bre! Happy your back :)

SideNote: I know this is'nt new but something told me to look at this...

[Moth Phoenix]

Interesting and deep :D
Awesome little poem.

[Sseoni]

That was quite a poem! I really liked it! It was short, but it said a lot! Silence can be a good thing for some relationships. Without silence from time to time, the relationship could be ruined. Brilliant poem! :D

[Lena M. P.]

A very strong write with wisdom peppered throughout.

[poetic soul]

so simple and SO hard hitting!!! it is a kick-a*s poem (hope you dont mind me saying that)....jus loved the read....awesome...awesome!!!

:) Love,
Krishna

[lakaka]

:) I like it. A LOT. :D I think it really captures how silence means different things for different people. There is thoughtful, content silence; enjoying the quiet of the outside because it matches the quiet serenity inside. Great piece!

[lauren emily]

Guess there's two kinds of silences...it just depends on how you look at them.
I like this..Short, but to the point and very nicely written. :)

~Lauren

[Andrew'sWonderland]

A nice, short, and sweet write!! Also, so so true! Silence can mean hundreds of things, you just have to be open minded and in the moment!!

[Drew]

Very nice. I liked it a lot. It was short, but lovely and beautifully written.
I can't wait to read more; keep up the great work.

[Jemma]

I liked it.

Nice, short and sweet.