Midnight Loving

I asked you a question
The night before.

Could you locate the North Star?

You replied with a smile,
Of course.

A quiet chuckle,
A curvy smile,
A proud sparkle in your eyes.

I held you from behind,
Guided your face upwards.

Well, that expansive space
In between each star,
That's how deep my love for you is.

That dark,
Unnamed space,
I shall name after
Every freckle on your body,
Every hair on your head,
Every name you ever called me.

Every time you see the moon,
You'll think of me,
And every word
I ever said.

Every kiss
I ever planted.

I sowed seeds into your skin,
Watered them with your blood,
Tended to them with your heart.

Every night they grew,
Every night our love expanded.

Sighs through the night,
Moans into the sky,
Kisses imprinted on your body.

Messy hair,
Sweaty body,
Exhausted minds,
Tired hands.

Lips whispered into your ear,
My dear, I'll love you,
Til the very end.

Reviews

[xoxo]

this is so sweet aw. I felt every word of this, I really love the romance captured in this. t's great

[zaisham9393]

Sweet and magical moments!
Well written, it's beautiful :D!
Thank you for sharing !

[YumnaKay]

This reads like a love letter. I like how you used the North Star to define love :)
You know I love this piece ;) :) Sweetly penned, Kesha :)

[Kesha]

Yeah it kind of does, and yes, thank you for liking it so much :D

[YumnaKay]

You're welcome! Always a pleasure :)

[Mr.Writer]

Dayum... that was amazing Kesha!
The ending nearly sent chills down my spine!
I really liked it, keep it up!

[Kesha]

Thank you very much Shaan!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Annette Pisano Higley]

Intimate, passionate, sooo tender....lovely and intense moment between lovers. Tracing stars and spaces on a lover's body to write an oath of everlasting adoration. Eloquent, primal and profoundly moving imagery "I sowed seeds into your skin, watered them with your blood." Amazing poem. Brava!

[Kesha]

Thank you very much for such a lovely review! :)

[Priyanshi]

So beautifully penned it ,dear, in a perfect way and really a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it, Kesha.

[Kesha]

Thank you for your lovely words I'm glad you liked it

[Priyanshi]

Always a pleasure...

[duff]

Everything written is laid out before your eyes in a way where you can lose yourself in the imagery. From holding each other and panning to the sky to "messy hair". Intense sensuality. I swear it got warmer in here, lol. Beautifully done Kesha. Nice work.

[Kesha]

Thank you very much for this lovely review

[duff]

You're so welcome