tell me ~ you love me (Edited by YumnaKay)

tell me ~ you love me (Edited by YumnaKay)

A Poem by Kesha
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A piece I wrote that YumnaKay edited :)

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Turn off the light, 
you're disturbing ... the quiet - 

He whispered to me sweetly,
he called me -- darling... 

and held me tightly;

enveloped by the darkness,
consumed by the silence.

We stared out the window,
the Eifel tower stood tall in the distance.

"
Mon chéri, 

tu es mon monde, 
ma galaxie,

mon tout..."

Can we dance in the night?
Can we bathe ourselves in the starlight?
Can you kiss me softly, please

... Darling,

let me live in your chest,
let me bury myself in your lungs ---

so you can't breathe without feeling me;
without inhaling ~ my scent.

Tell me you love me, deeply.
Tell me you'll plant me in your mouth.
Tell me you'll water me

~ and let me grow ~

Darling,
tell me ~ you love me ...


© 2017 Kesha



Author's Note

Kesha
French translation- "My darling, you are my world, my galaxy, my all"

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Soft, gentle and wonderful words for love. Thank you Kesha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kesha

2 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome dear friend.
This is incredibly lovely and romantic, not in a sappy way. And if i were to ever fall in love, i would love to hear those whispers in y year :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kesha

2 Months Ago

Thank you for such a kind review, glad you liked it :)
A beautifuly woven poem, Kesha! 😊
I loved the simplicity, honestly, the Flow of this piece how eloquent it is.

A suggestion:

In the 5 the line (" and held me tightly")
I feel, "and held me tight" would be better 😊


That's just my thinking, other than than it's a wonderful piece..Thanx for sharing 😊


-Saumya

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Thank you for such a lovely review :) I'm glad you liked it
Saumya

3 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊
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The world of love awakens in your sacred connection, the whole of life weaving you two closer together. Everything feels so tender, so richly painted, so eternal.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much, glad you liked it
I love the soft, breathtaking quality of this write. You already know I love the french part the most ;) and thank you again for letting me edit, Kesha! :))

P.S I can't help but laugh at the dumbass review below and the sweet words he spoke about me are etched on my mind now hahah lol

Love your font colour too :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Lmao you two are too much 😂
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Well of course not in your case ;) you're adorable :p I mean your face hahaha 😂😂
Kesha.. read more
Kesha

3 Months Ago

Haha it's gotta be 😂
Superb piece . the lines are so beautiful..and its romantic poem.
I really enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!
Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

My pleasure.
Great to see you around, again, Kesha...! Is the same poem I reviewed on hellopoetry...? Well, regardless, I love this... Tell me you love me deeply, deep enough to plant thyself in my mouth... Stupendous effort, both by the writer, and the editor... Kudos' to both... Very nicely penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Yes it is, but I wanted to post it here as well since I love it so much :P and thank you! Such a lov.. read more
Silente

3 Months Ago

Ah, well good, then... You love it because it so darn awesome... My pleasure, and of course, was eve.. read more
Kesha

3 Months Ago

Haha thanks :) and glad you enjoyed it even more ;)
wonderful!
Amazing flow of words.
I loved it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Kesha

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it :)

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