Behind these eyes.

Behind these eyes.

A Poem by breakthebrokenone

Behind these eyes there lingers
So much love
So much longing
And so much hope

For a better life
For a fresh beginning
For a new page with a new pen

But all I have is sadness.

© 2017 breakthebrokenone



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Words cannot describe the radiance of this poem - it's fantastic! And it has potential of being relatable to many an artist in the world. My only suggestion is to say "these" eyes instead of "my" (gives it more power and a sort of je ne sais quoi that really makes the poem more profound, and also makes the "I" in the last line more powerful. Well done!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Words cannot describe the radiance of this poem - it's fantastic! And it has potential of being relatable to many an artist in the world. My only suggestion is to say "these" eyes instead of "my" (gives it more power and a sort of je ne sais quoi that really makes the poem more profound, and also makes the "I" in the last line more powerful. Well done!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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breakthebrokenone
breakthebrokenone

christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand



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I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..

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