Will you stay

Will you stay

A Poem by Breanna Riddle
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This poem is about my mother who passed away when i was nine and how i felt her sudden disappearance from my life affected me.

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Will you stay
or go away
fly up high
or stay by my side
Will you stay
or will you go
run away
or stay at home
will you stay 
or find a way 
to say good bye
or maybe say it another time
Will you stay 
or go away
whatever you do 
please just take me too

© 2015 Breanna Riddle


Author's Note

Breanna Riddle
please ignore the lacking of punctuation

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I am so touched by this...it is simple...pleading...real and honest...your Mother is with you every day...every time you think of her, she is right there...those we love our standing just around some corner...in another place...but they never leave us alone...keep writing...writing is such a blessed way of releasing our feelings...keep sharing, the world needs your words...somewhere there is another young woman missing her mother too...your words can help to heal...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

thank you im happy to hear that you like my poetry and your right i started writting to deal with my.. read more



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A touching poem erupted with strong feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It is really good it flows and is very touching.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
I am so touched by this...it is simple...pleading...real and honest...your Mother is with you every day...every time you think of her, she is right there...those we love our standing just around some corner...in another place...but they never leave us alone...keep writing...writing is such a blessed way of releasing our feelings...keep sharing, the world needs your words...somewhere there is another young woman missing her mother too...your words can help to heal...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

thank you im happy to hear that you like my poetry and your right i started writting to deal with my.. read more
i feel this explains how i see my mothers death and how i wish she would come back


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 29, 2015
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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



About
I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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