Suicide

you had a way out

and so do i 

but i have to stay 

for those on the other side

i know they love me

and i know they mean well

but lets just face it...

they'er putting me through hell

everyday they smile 

and everyday i cry

all i see is rain 

and all they see is the sun shinning bright

i know its hard to understand

why suicide is at high demand

but lets just think for a minuet

why some people just want to end it 

when you're in pain

you start to cry

when your heart breaks

you essentially die 

the pain is real

and that's all they feel 

so the best option for them

is to end all the pain 

and end everything that could cause the pain

by ending everything around them

Reviews

[aruntp Thalassery]

Suicide is philosophical... It is a thorny bridge between life and death. One see death calling from the other side of the bridge...by braveness it is all one should have to walk through the bridge and hug the death on the other side...but when one hug the death, you wont see the bridge, to cross back again...Life is a past experiences....One walk with the God of Death with all souvenirs one got from the life experiences.... Death is a mystery, but reality....Life is a mystery, but reality...

[Breanna Riddle]

you're right and i like the way you explain this concept of life being a mystery and reality at the same time

[Laura S-C]

This was a somewhat confronting poem and was written well as it causes you to rethink suicide. Well it made me. Good job it is great.

[Breanna Riddle]

thank you :)