are you proud

are you proud 

of who i have become

or am i a loser

someone who lacks commitment

Are you proud

of what i can do

or are you ashamed

of how i have become so mean

Are you proud 

of where i will go

or are you upset

of where my path of life will lead me

Are you proud

of how i moved on

or are you upset

of how i pushed your memory aside

Are you proud 

of what i want to do

or are you scared

of how i might die

Are you proud

of how i keep you alive

or do you want me to move on

and live my own life

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

"or am i a looser" to "or am i a loser"

I wanted to read more after reading your first piece. Very well done. You appear to have a great deal of pain and anger to draw from for your writing. I wish you only the best young lady.

[Breanna Riddle]

thanks i never really was a good speller and yeah there is pain and anger but the only way to express it is in poetry and it doesn't come out too ugly i don't think. Thank you for reading:)

[Willard Wells]

Writing is a great way to express. I do the same. Whatever the mood or situation if I have feelings or thoughts, I write them.

And no it is not ugly. I am a bad speller and basically bad at grammar at all levels, but I move on anyway.

[Breanna Riddle]

Yeah its a great way to let go of everything and i can't deal with grammar or spelling either that's the one thing that always kills me.

[Willard Wells]

Spell check is my friend. One other thing is since I am closer to leaving than staying I have seen many words over the years. This gives me an edge in that I will recognize a word being wrong, even not know the correct spelling. Kind of like a cheat sheet.

Sometimes my writing bothers people since I will use no punctuation. Such is life.

[Breanna Riddle]

yeah that is a definite advantage haha. and people get mad at me when i don't use punctuation tooread moreyeah that is a definite advantage haha. and people get mad at me when i don't use punctuation too

[Valentine]

This made me wonder...just who they were trying to impress, parents, friend, lover etc. Try impressing yourself,,the rest will follow. Valentine

[wordman]

i`m sure they are proud,but you have to move on,but the memories you will always keep .