inside i die so you can live again

Inside I'm hurt

I only feel pain

And i have no self worth

Inside I cry

My heart is broken

And empty inside

Inside there is no facade

I don't hide my pain

And my emotions can be seen

Inside It's a prison

My darkest secrets eating at me

Even my soul can't fight it

Inside there's a dream

A world without pain

A world with you standing next to me

Inside I'm broken

But you're still alive 

My memory of you

Is the reason i died

So that i could keep  you alive

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

You and I write different, but so much is similar. Scary. Similar layout to the previous one I read and also well crafted. The message is mixed and I expect has more meaning for you. It seems to express the honesty of your feelings and you are no longer staying to face the negative world thrown at you daily or the person pushing down on your life. Nicely done and thanks for sharing.

[Breanna Riddle]

Yeah i agree and you have the basic layout of my idea when i wrote this. Thank you for reading :)read moreYeah i agree and you have the basic layout of my idea when i wrote this. Thank you for reading :)

[Laura S-C]

Congratulations with getting Beautiful in the contest. This was an emotional poem and I loved how you kept stating that you were pain that you went through all that to keep the memory of someone alive. Well done.

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you so much for reading I really appreciate it and I'm really glad you liked it :)

[JMaster1]

your writing is mature , very mature words , I love it

[Breanna Riddle]

thank you :)

[Aphy!]

"Inside I'm broken
But you're still alive
My memory of you
Is the reason i died
So that i could keep you alive"

Last stanza really got to me
And it kinda wrapped the whole poem up nicely

Thank you so much for sharing your lovely work hey
Aphy

[Bibie]

Deep piece, and lovely. i like the twist in the topic, its creative.