Me? That's A First

I'm totally head over heels for this kid. Let me be ^.^

I never thought that any of this would happen to me

I'm all too sure that it's all a crazy dream.

I guess fairytales do come true

Because there he comes with my glass shoe;

We think feelings like this only happen in movies and books,

One sweet line and I was totally hooked

It really is as fun as it looks,

Yet I feel he tripped me all to fast,

Let's just hope our feelings of lust last.

 

I don't think he'll be able to handle me when I bring it,

And if he can, I guess he'll just have to wing it.

I guess my swagg's just too much

Because he's all too tempted to touch.

This seems like such a childish game,

Yet I really want our feelings to stay the same.

Damn; he's a cutie

Yet he thinks I'm a beauty,

And when I talk to him, I turn to mush and feel like such a girl,

I think if I play this game much longer I'm gonna hurl.

He makes me sleep with a smile,

I guess he passes that trial,

I really want him to be mine.

Please give me a sign.

Author's Note

Childish love, feeling like you love him when you know the feelings might not last.

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Befitting Glass slippers or not
And i aint your fairy godpa either
for all you know Your sign is here:

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[misha]

This is a really cute poem. I havn't felt such a love like this before and i'm sure it's great. I loved this write!!

[Yina]

I've had this feeling to:) If you haven't already, read 'The Most Amazing Moment' that'sa my version of when this appened to me:)

I really like this:) I'm really bad with rhyming every 2 lines (any rhyming for that matter) so I really admire this!:)

[light and ashes]

This poem is absolutely adorable :] precious descriptions.
your rhyme is really nice and it has a great flow. "I guess fairytales do come true, because here he comes with my glass shoe."
"I guess my swagg's just too much because hes all too tempted to touch."
haha too freaking cute of a poem.
It was also very well written and beautifully constructed.
Nice

[Silent Knight]

That is so sweet! I love it.

[Daydreamer54]

I love the flow and the rhyming and it's very sweet! I can totally relate to this! Great write! I wosh u good luck!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

We never grow out of crushes. Done oh so well!

[Kyla H]

Awh, this is so cute and lovely and nice! Though..I know what your trying to express, many people doubt that they may be falling to fast..Very nicely done!