The Seas Of Us

The Seas Of Us

A Poem by Suzy Q
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Total Ocean Fanatics. I love my trumpet players.

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My thoughts of you outnumber the grains of sand in the shore,

When you leave my side, you leave me wanting more

Like the waves in the ocean, your feelings are unpredictable

And the dimples on your chin make your lips look, oh so kissable.

 

You're the anemone and I'm the clown fish

You're always there for me, whenever I wish.

You're the predator and I'm the prey

Like a great white and a fish with no say

 

You're the wind across the seven seas while I'm the sail on a boat

Seems like our friendship is the only thing keeping me afloat

 

I'm that shark just hunting for your blood

When I see you see it my emotions start to flood

I guess I need you to survive,

I need you to feel alive.

© 2011 Suzy Q


Author's Note

Suzy Q
Yeah, it's not all that great. Could use a bit of work. But I like it.

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This poem is quite imaginative, slightly dreamy in the beginning, and intense in the end. Nice. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem flows so effortlessly, enjoyed it so much:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You make rhyming with heart appear so easy.
This was sweet work. The metaphor was spot on.
Standing Ovation.

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW outstanding =] I love the imagery and the flow. Awesome work Suzy =]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem, well put together I like it a lot

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the way you wrote your desires and feelings. I believe when you will know what you need and want. Are willing to share time with another. Love and life can be good.
"You're the anemone and I'm the clown fish
You're always there for me, whenever I wish."
Thank you for the outstanding poem of love and hope.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it to :D it's so good and beautiful and the imagery is just as much (: great job Suzy :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this, and I love how you capture the ocean in it. I am in love with the ocean. I've been numerous times. Last summer included, but for me, my longing for the ocean is much more than just wanting to be there to hear the sounds and the feel of the surf. I was raised on the beach. It is my lifeline to home. This was a great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


me too i like it too!!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Suzy Q
Suzy Q

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