clarity

clarity

A Poem by Latifa
"

sometimes thing seems so blurry that you just have to take a stand and rethink

"
Whirl around whirl

Whirl into the endless swirl

To find the elixir pearl

In a delicate moment of placid whim

When the sunbeams have come to dim

And the moon saluted with striking grin

With countless stars you rally your sin

Repent from the devouring hymn

Picking yourself from the slippery brim

Making the everlasting vow

Turning the table now

Rising from the burdening bow

Beating the odds no matter how

© 2013 Latifa


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Making the everlasting vow
Turning the table now
Rising from the burdening bow
Beating the odds no matter how.

Very nice poem. Great write. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


reminds me
of my old turntable
love records
HAI!!
better then this digital crap
HAI!!! again!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so accurate and you've described it so beautifully, you leave me captivated at the end of every line... There are always those moments in life where we need to find our feet again and regain perspective, although the feeling of being caught up in whirl after whirl to the point where everything else suddenly becomes blurry can also be quite a worthwhile feeling while it lasts... I enjoyed this a lot, thank you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A good build up to the final line, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



A strong call for belief and positivity is contained in the piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thanks for the read
Your imagery and balance of metaphor are always wonderful hon xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you dear
A writer I know well, who writes very well, she has a feeling for English ...very good !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely words
very nicely penned with ni9ce flow of metaphor and nice images. well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you Khalid
Ah! I love it, nicely written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you dear
This reminds me of a dance with rises and falls and rhythm - wonderfully penned .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thanks for the lovely review

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Added on October 25, 2013
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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