I survived

I survived

A Poem by Latifa
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patience , persistence , never giving up

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Secretive, crying melody is crawling to my veins
A frantic feeling is wrapping around my heart 
Shivered, trembled, lost in wonder
Time packed his hours and flew to the unknown
Baffling air is striding and shrugging his shoulders
Blurring clouds are halting, imprisoning the threads of recognition
Rippling waves are sailing from my shores 
The vacant house is wrecked 
The dusty pages are burned 
The windows of fate are opened
I glanced from the ruins and winked to the wild blue yonder

© 2013 Latifa


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Beautiful imagery and flow! the words speak for themselves! I loved the way you express the thoughts! keep it up:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I enjoyed the story in the poem.
"The vacant house is wrecked
The dusty pages are burned
The windows of fate are opened
I glanced from the ruins and winked to the wild blue yonder"
The above lines were my favorite. I like the wink to the wild blue wonder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


beautiful,well written you are an amazing poet


Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you so much Rosy.
Ghost Writer

9 Years Ago

You are very into your writing, I could tell don't stop gifting the world with your talent.
Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you darling for your uplifting encouragements.
Very nicely worded and beautifully expressed. Beautiful my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was wonderful Latifa. So filled with hope and such a positive outlook. Nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you Jack for your uplifting review.
that last line....I just loved it. winked into the wild blue yonder! Yes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


very good wording here...paints a picture after a fashion...or waves of pictures of feeling

Posted 10 Years Ago


first bugs now seashores
you are everywhere
make a film of this
like the opening of
dark shadows
the tv show
not the damn film
HAI!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Impressive and excellent personifications! It's been ages since I last read a poem with personifications as good as this. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you so much for your lovely comment
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Love the metaphoric imagery in this one. The feeling of losing someone is felt.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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