Blazing heat of summer

yeah, it's Haiku

stabbing rays of heat

bruise the green grass to yellow,

oh poor, sweating grass.

Reviews

[Parimal Pratyush]

wow.. so true, so true...

[Latifa]

thank you for all the reviews dear friend.

[MomzillaNC]

Another great haiku. :D

[Pryde Foltz]

The summer heat can be a beating at that:)

[Sami Khalil]

"stabbing rays of heat
bruise the green grass to yellow,
oh poor, sweating grass."

[Sami Khalil]

A marvelous Haiku. Bravo.......................

[wordman]

metaphors where would we be without them
great write

[Brave girl]

ha beautiful write Latifa, good way to describe the sun and its effect on nature...great ink dear writer,and dear neighbour...haha i'm Moroccan so.. lol
anywas , write some more :)

[Latifa]

glad to meet you neighbor, thank you for the review

[Leslie Philibert]

Agree with the excellent review of Christopher. I do though see too the strict rules of classical Japanese poetry not as prescriptive, as the form or structure of Japanese is so unique as not to be applicable to other languages. I often read reviews packed full of comments about iambs and trochees and meter. I tend these days to be pragmatic ; if it works, it`s fine, and I think this too is a good poem.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

hahah taking a shot at Haiku. nice try, petit and nice

[Stonz P.]

I will agree with Christopher Robin, and you have penned a good Haiku, better than I had, when I started out on them.
Nice work.