nightly nights

it's been a long while since i've writen anything, so this one is after a long period of writers block.

Nightly,nightly nights
come neighing,
they sense my urge for shades
to cool off the itching flames.

nightly, nightly nights
throw their blinking cape
at my crouching spine of worry,
I lay under to pant,
I lay under to solace,
then I fondle with the stars
to shed the aweless
torment and renew the promise
to abolish all that is malice.

Reviews

[raj24]

GREAT FLOW OF WORDS AND A NIGHT TO REMEMBER AND A PROMISE TO RESOLVE EVERYTHING TOMORROW.. ENJOYED READING IT N YOU KEEP WRITING BECAUSE WE ALL ARE WAITING :)

[Latifa]

thank you for stopping by, it has been a while indeed

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I love the use of assonance! It really gave the poem a greater depth to it. You are very talented, Latifa! Thanks for sharing!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Michael :) God bless ya

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of thoughts. You create places and thoughts for the reader with the strong description. I liked the ending. To abolish all that is malice. Would be a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you my friend for stopping by, I appreciate it much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Norah]

very beautiful...nice write

[Namrata]

That's some real beautiful imagery used to describe your deepest thoughts. The choice of words are sensually elegant quite contrary to the message it delivers.

[deleted]

I like the description to this...great job! 😊

[Ian Gilmour]

This poem had a very unique flow to it but it works very well. Nice job.

[lostfiles]

Amazing poetry, great vocabulary and flow to it :)

Well done :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Cody Williams]

Beautiful write Latifa! I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Avinash]

Its a beautiful night depicted my eloquent words drenched in dreams.