barefooted

Happy world peotry day my fellow writers, enjoy !

Does  she walk barefooted?
 she wants to lurk her way out in disguise,
her shoes are too illustrious!
 she has  dumped  the salience that got her no good;
she has  dumped the grey salience.

the springy dawn has brought the basket of flowers
 and the  sky has ripped the clouds of grey,
she came out pretty fine , the sky!
so blue , you can sift through the color;
 so blue,  your eyes squint of its color,
 so she gazed to the sky and decided :
I'll   paint my self in blue
may be... I'll  rip my clouds of grey,
I will walk  barefooted!

Reviews

[Jeannette Lunete]

May the force of freedom be with you. I've enjoyed it a lot. :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is so much joy and beauty flowing through all the colors of your words! It is as if you taught them how to dance.. and set them free from your soul... Wondrous!

[Latifa]

your review had warmed my heart and made me smile, thank you dear poet:)

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very nice poem, Latifa! I enjoyed the questioning and elegance very much! Thank you for sharing it with us!

[Sheila Kline]

And that is victory! Leave behind the spare baggage, that which weighs one down, and move on to the good!!
Excellent thoughts of renewal in spirit and attitude!

[C. Rose]

"rip my clouds" is very fun.
I smiled when I found out this was about the sky.
Very clever :)

It makes me want to walk barefoot with the sky.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Mutasem Amayreh]

Latifa, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I ever read.
The colors, the overall feeling generated by the poem gives life to all weary souls.

[Latifa]

Oh gosh, wow, thank you for this wonderful review!

[Tam Warink]

Every word that an author chooses to use says something about them. Though you may have imagined the "her" in this phrasing it is you, Latifa, that intrigues the most. What sky, what hues impressed upon your eyes... what meandering of thoughts etched a purpose upon your heart? This modest reader may only wonder at such things as it encounters a mind that delicately touches the boundaries of its own personal condition.

100 barefoot clouds

[Latifa]

thank you dear Tam for the review.

[Ruth]

And be wild and free....gorgeous!! xo

[Wandervogel]

Beautiful piece.....keep writing

[Latifa]

thank you .

[Namrata]

Ripping off the clouds of grey is actually a very strong opposition to monochromatic mundane life !
A brave and beautiful write.

[Latifa]

thank you for this review.