rusting twilight

rusting twilight

A Poem by Latifa
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I lovve haikus

"

                                               


Life rusting twilight,
mindfully beaking darkness,
shrugging off the days.

© 2016 Latifa



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Yes, it is.
Like the haiku which came out very powerfully.
Thanks for sharing it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


I love this :) The conciseness is powerful here, gorgeous hon :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


This is short, but profound. It caused my mind to expand.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Nice first line.
Love the idea of life rusting something.


Posted 11 Months Ago


I veer into mind & soul peaking into the joy of my soul.

Great write!

Regards,
Al

Posted 11 Months Ago


Love it!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


what I love about Haiku poems is how it metaphorically connects emotions with nature .This one is awesome :)!
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Latifa

11 Months Ago

thank you for the review :)
that is why I love haikus too
This is really beautiful. The power of Haiku is in few words to elicit emotion and imagery.

Posted 11 Months Ago


a dazzling haiku...love the last line of "shrugging off the days"

read the middle line as "breaking"..did you mean that?

j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Latifa

11 Months Ago

thank you for the review, but no i intentionally ment beaking, as metaphor when the bird is beaking.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

oh i love that.....yes.
I love how poetry can make a moment come alive in your mind, and yours does this so fluidly. These twilight moments are my favorite, living between day and night. Beautifully voiced.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Latifa

11 Months Ago

ooh thank you craig :) happy new year

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Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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