No one sleep walks better than water

No one sleep walks better than water

A Poem by Latifa
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I wish for my fellow writers to unserstand the metaphor I'm using in this.

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I shall allow the water to sleep above me

As it is sleeping inside me.

It shall erode the stone I drag

And carry life unto me,

As it is carrying it inside me.

I don’t mind a tomb of flow,

I have sat on the dry for too long.

I shan’t drown.

No one sleep walks  better than waters

 


© 2017 Latifa



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Sensitive and wonderful use of words my friend. Your words alive and strong. Making the reader feel and understand the words. I agree with your logic. Thank you Latifa for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Hours Ago


This is very nice Latifa, I'm really diggin' this!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Vivid imagination!
Creative peice with a powerful title"no one sleep walks better than water"
Keep writing:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


I see unique bubbles brewing in the mind of a friend. She is the scuba diver in poetic waters.

Bravo!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Months Ago


Latifa

8 Months Ago

thank you so much Alfred, your reviews keep me going :) :) i am most appreciative of them
Sounds amazing to my ears. Very poetic . Lik dancing at midnight on the mountains

Posted 8 Months Ago


Latifa

8 Months Ago

thank you for the review :)
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8 Months Ago

You wellcome i realy like that poem
Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Wow!!! I like it when i read "No one sleep walks better than water".

Wonderful write, thanks for sharing....

Posted 9 Months Ago


You speak a beautiful mystery in your words, dear poet. Water, how it cleanses, how it carries life within us, through us. I rather enjoy absorbing the secrets of each line and letting them utter their dreams.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Latifa

9 Months Ago

thank you Craig :)
Wow. It is mysterious. Kudos...:)...........

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

You are welcome above and under water...:::)))))
Latifa

9 Months Ago

lol, tht's funny
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

::::))))))))))

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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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