"JERA"

I read a poem that inspired me, though it was not meant for me. I saw in it the definition of a "soul kiss"

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“JERA”

 

Your whispered words

float in,

brush away the decay of my mind,

and breathe

in new life time after time…

 

My breath,

my words

taken away…I need them not

~as I inhale you.

 

When my mind returns

I give to you…

~a poor offering for such sweet serenity~

that you may breathe

what you mean to me…

that you may

inhale me…

 

Oh, How I ache for this sublime symbiosis

~this gnosis

of All

knowing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2/4/08

 

Author's Note

�JERA�

float in,
and breathe
My breath,
my words

~as I inhale you.

I give to you�
that you may breathe
what you mean to me�
that you may
inhale me�

~this gnosis
of All
knowing

Reviews

[Karen666]

great piece

[Anna]

this is wonderfully done it was a pure pleasure to read!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very beautiful .. soul kisses are the best.. they tell you much about a person and bond two together.
Love the whole poem.. the lines 'i need them not, i inhale you ',, a loving and beautiful poem ..

Chloe
xoxo

[amanda_joy]

Oh yes! those last lines are perfect!

A sublime symbiosis indeed.
This is stunning Bri, and so much space framed by your words..
beautiful..

A.Joy

[ah]

enjoyable read, thanks for asking me to read it.... keep writing

[I'm his Muse]

Very pretty. Good work yet again!

[desertraven]

beautiful piece. :)
Sandra

[Tania Leigh]

"Soul kiss" .... I like that.

"My breath,
my words
taken away�I need them not
~as I inhale you."

Who but soulmates would give of themselves so completely? Great piece here.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A beautiful notion, I would that you were on here when I ran a contest regarding soul mates - this would have been a winner for sure. Sweet, succinct and lovely. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Great work!

Sorry that you are under the weather. Hopefully, you will feel better soon.

I like the lines:

"Your whispered words
float in,
brush away the decay of my mind,
and breathe
in new life time after time�"

They have good imagery as well as a subtle, refined feel to them. Not too little; not too much.

Just write! (Ha! I made pun! I kill me!) :)

-Gabe