Remember Yourself

Remember Yourself

A Poem by Your Tasty Field Advisor

Look out your window right now

Go ahead, do it
Look out that window as if you were watching memories
Remember as you read this poorly written piece of art
Remember your friends
Your family
Times when you look our at the world and imagine it to be different
 
The rolling hills of grass whispering softly to the wind
The tree waving at you from afar
The setting sun closing its bright eye for the day
As the moon rises like the beautiful birth of a child
Remember your love
Your loyalty
And above all, remember yourself
Stay who you are inside
As the wind blowing across my hand, be yourself.

© 2008 Your Tasty Field Advisor


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Tasty I do enjoy your poems!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is wonderful! I loved how you kept asking the reader to remember. Emotional! Great piece of poetry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is heartfelt
emotionally rendered and expresses talented in a nostalgic way
a definite 100
in the way your words reflect pure poetical design
excellent job. keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is beautiful. a very pleasant read. i enjoyed how you described the different stages of life and the importance of them. your visual imagery is percise. not to little and not to much

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such an enduring piece - it sits there quietly, simply, and beckons me into the deeps. There's something grabbing at me in that second paragraph, not only the images of the friendly earth beckoning and smiling in it's cycles, but more, hints of one's own birth..... and then the best admonition one person can give another - be yourself. I could read this many times and still feel moved....should tape the last 3 lines to my mirror.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nicely written. Great job man.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Honestly, this was beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful piece here, you expressed an emotionally convincing depiction, the passionate focus
is depthfully charged, the imagery takes the reader to the moment of happening, and its all
around, a well written, sentimental design, presenting a vision the reader can identify with,
I enjoyed reading this poem, clear, encouraging, thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, you made me remember something, too. you made me remember being on philadelphia, new york. it was an army base way up north, and i remembered the forest that surrounded most of the apartment complex, the way the sky looked when the sun rose and set. i like your way of writing, and how you demand that i remember what i was and that i stay me wherever i may go in life...or something like that. XD either way, well done i say! you got a fan out of me ^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Remember as you read this poorly written piece of art - isn't that up for the reader to decide?

I like the metaphor at the end, looking outside the window, remembering to be yourself who you are in the inside; of your house, of yourself.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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dad, if you read this, you should know the facts before you start assuming that all the dark poems are about you. just saying that you arent always my muse to write thoes dark poems about. so, dont .. more..

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