Crushed

Crushed.

I'm crushed,

Shattered,

Beaten,

Broken, 

Bruised.

But still,

I breathe.

Barely,

Getting enough,

Oxygen

To live.

I wish, you felt

The way i do.

I love,

Everything

About you.

You're eyes,

Hair, Smile.

Everything,

About you.

Yet you

Shattered,

Bruised,

Broke

My heart.

And I

Still

Love you,

Forever and

Always.

I am crushed.

Crushed.

Reviews

[Michaela Briggeman]

Honestly, I totally agree Josiah...the usually drive me crazy too but this was th only way to conve my feelings at the time....haha XD

[Josiah Russell]

An interesting poem. Mean as it may sound, poems set up like this drive me crazy, but I can see the reasoning behind it.

Overall, it's quite nice, and I can tell you put a lot of feeling into it. :)

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This is a sad write, but flows well

[Anicca]

This was beautiful. It sums up the injustice of love so beautifully. Thanks for sharing. And just remember, these feeling wont last forever :)

[watch_the_world]

awweh, this makes me so sad :(