Betrayal

Betrayal

A Poem by breezy

You betrayed my trust,

and yet you act as if nothing happened.

you call me,

but get mad when i do not answer.

how did our relationship get this bad?

this used to be the best father daughter relationship the world had ever had.

don't call me no more,

because i will not answer.

don't try to make it better,

because i'm pretty sure i'll hate you forever.

im done trying to forgive you and be the perfect daughter.

you dont deserve it,

i'm onto a new chapter.

© 2010 breezy


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Betrayal takes a different form here. Instead of talking about the usual way people explain betrayal, you've used it to describe someone you trusted who suddenly turned a deaf ear on your feelings. It's very sad.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 12 Years Ago


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