cheater

looking at your picture i see the magic we had
looking back at the times i see why im mad
treating me like i was nothing
going on like i wasnt here
i treated you like you were everything
but ever since then there was not a tear
you didnt care
you dont matter anymore
so try to forget the times we had before
your the one that hurt me so stop trying to be the innocent one
you think all the times that we had were times that were fun
but most times you acted like i wasnt the only one
you went behind my back and said there were no other hons
so dont play me like im a game
you and me will never be the same
so go away and leave me alone
your the one that has everything blown
maybe if you didnt sneak around everything would be fine
but no you had to go and lie
instead of me you picked her
if you didnt do that i'd still be yours

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

Great poem.
Writing really helps.
Keep it up!
-Elissa

[ATG]

You got to hate men who cheat. They give my gender a bad name. I hate cheaters.

This was a well written poem. There were no grammar errors from what I could tell. It was an very interesting read. I liked it.

[Susanna F]

Very well written, I'm sure you let all your emotions out onto the paper. It helps, huh? Keep writing, you've got a knack for it!

[Chaos Stone]

'a guy did that to me too'
lol
quit dating jerks and give the other guys a chance

[Stephanie]

I can feel the contempt in this, if its a true story. If its not, its still very good. I'm sure tons of girls can relate to this. I'd change a few words to make it smoother, but overall I definitely loved it. :)

[Kiara]

very relatable : )
i like the rythm this poem
contains, also has a nice flow
as well, a new favorite
-arabella

[Wildecat]

I have to agree with the comments below, I think most girls can relate to this poem, nice write.

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

I don't think there is a girl on the planet who can't relate to you here. I liked how you told this one, so plain and simple, revealing all the faults, seemingly without a second thought, like showing the whole world an open wound so that they may understand you better. Believe me when I tell you, I know how you feel! Your words are strong and your work is pure, I love it :)

Keep on writing!

A&U

[Meradee]

Cheaters are horrible. I believe you expressed this nicely. Sometimes you just want to slap the jerks up side the head and tell them to hold their breath until you come back for them.
Pepper...

[Suzy Sunshine]

Wow. That's great!
I know exactly how you feel, girl!
A guy did that to me!
But the poem is great. I can understand your feelings and you did a great job of getting your point across.