Old and New

about a guy

Trying to forget flashbacks of us
From the moment we laughed to the moment we touched
Days pass by and you’re still on my mind
I will probably think of you till the end of time

I never wanted our friendship to end
But you have changed so much that we won’t ever mend
One drastic change and one broken heart
Has caused every little thing we had to fall apart

What happened to the amazing guy you used to be
The one that made me smile and forget to breath
He seemed to have gotten replaced by someone who doesn’t care
And every time I call for him, he’s never there

One mistake I’ve made was falling in too deep
Getting out of this takes one big leap
Moving on is the hardest thing for me to do
Because I feel empty and lost without you

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a sadness here, that sense of remembrance in the beauty and love now lost. Your words convey that sorrow so deeply.

[zack]

well i will be the first to say this is a great poem real good i like the way it all comes together