an inarticulated bridge

an inarticulated bridge

the apparition of these headlights
on a flat road;

an arm, outstretched
flexing onto

a butterfly so concrete,
its last fluttering

a sound made in the distance
mistaken for a heartbeat.

Reviews

[Tabitha t]

great imagery. i enjoyed this a bit short but it gets the job odne. well written

[Benny]

Meant for images and I see them. And here the fluttering. Nicely done.

[B. Maaitah]

the striking thing about this piece is the briefness of it makes for all the depth... as if the more laconic the verses are, the more I felt I can dive in with my thoughts ...
good job :)