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A Poem by xoxo

the icy cold water prickles my skin as we make an effort to go deeper into the river, which is tough because we keep slipping on the rocks. the deeper we get into the water, we're floating, floating off into an uncontrollable current led by nature. a boat starts to head into our direction, causing many waves, and we both just laugh and look into each other's eyes as the moments pass with ease. our hands intertwined as our feet float above the rocks beneath the water. your eyes, striking blue as this water. your hands, soft as the moss resting on the rocks. your smile, beautiful as the view of this place. your arms, welcoming as the community at this river. you only live once they say, but with you, i feel like i've lived a million times.

© 2017 xoxo



Author's Note

xoxo
definitely not a poem, but not sure what to consider it as.

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Not a poem? I thought it was beautiful! You can call it just about anything you want when its as sweet as this.

Even though it wasn't a lot to read, I got a lot out of it. Your wording and the flow made it easy to fallow and enjoy. I read it a few times, just because of the way it made me feel.

I may get more out of it then what I should. Starts out choppy and slippery and ends with holding, laughter and love. Sounds like a real relationship to me.

Well done. I will be reading more of you writings.

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thank you so much!!
Beautiful prose! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thank you !
Tthose moments of contentment are to be cherished. Beautiful write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


xoxo

5 Months Ago

thank you for the kind words
Very beautiful, sounds like heaven to be honest. I have a place I call my paradise near where I live and it's this amazing river with cliffs and lots of rocks. Went swimming there with a few friends last week and nearly froze to death ha! (In Canada) But last year I took my girlfriend and this reminded me of that so much. Thank you for sharing! Was good.

Posted 5 Months Ago


xoxo

5 Months Ago

thanks so much! glad it could remind you of a good time :)
very nice very descriptive prose
comfortable read

Posted 5 Months Ago


xoxo

5 Months Ago

thanks so much
ABG 2.0

5 Months Ago

your writings have matured in content and message
i suspect you have done so as well
xoxo

5 Months Ago

thank you lots

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